Dismal and morbid I became
Paths mine, she whenever crossed
Hers’ was sad story
Smile never; formed hers’ lips
Hers’ face defined melancholy
Pain reflected hers’ persona
Mine inside would freeze like ice
Numbed- all thoughts turned at her sight
Emptied felt I, from all thoughts then
Vaguely sensed I- vacuum
Whenever I met, hers’ blank stares
I felt complete hopelessness …..
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Hopelessness complete felt I
Stares blank hers’, met I whenever
Vacuum- I sensed vaguely
Then thoughts all from; I felt emptied
Sight her at; turned thoughts all- numbed
Ice like freeze; would insides mine
Persona hers’ reflected pain
Melancholy defined; face hers’
Lips hers’ never formed smile
Story sad was hers’
Crossed whenever she, mine paths
Became I morbid and dismal….
:) Do let me know what you think of it! It is my first attempt at this. Oh, just for knowledge, Palindrome writing is a form of writing wherein certain words, phrases written can be read backwards as well! :)
Paths mine, she whenever crossed
Hers’ was sad story
Smile never; formed hers’ lips
Hers’ face defined melancholy
Pain reflected hers’ persona
Mine inside would freeze like ice
Numbed- all thoughts turned at her sight
Emptied felt I, from all thoughts then
Vaguely sensed I- vacuum
Whenever I met, hers’ blank stares
I felt complete hopelessness …..
===============================
Hopelessness complete felt I
Stares blank hers’, met I whenever
Vacuum- I sensed vaguely
Then thoughts all from; I felt emptied
Sight her at; turned thoughts all- numbed
Ice like freeze; would insides mine
Persona hers’ reflected pain
Melancholy defined; face hers’
Lips hers’ never formed smile
Story sad was hers’
Crossed whenever she, mine paths
Became I morbid and dismal….
:) Do let me know what you think of it! It is my first attempt at this. Oh, just for knowledge, Palindrome writing is a form of writing wherein certain words, phrases written can be read backwards as well! :)
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