Wrenched, my heart
with every fall,
Your failure meant mine-
And there you stumbled again.
With little steps ebbing
you held my finger, looked at me
I still remember your twinkling eyes-
As you smiled at me, never tiring.
You took your first step little one
I sighed, looking at you
You took another step or two, then looked back at me-
And tears welled up in your sister's eyes, my little one.
Posted for D'Verse Poetics
Lovely, I could just picture the scene as if I was there. Thank you for sharing.
ReplyDeletebeautifully done, Priyanka!!
ReplyDeleteI was such a wreck... slate floors. You've captured a universal feeling.
ReplyDeleteOh. Disqus doesn't accept html language, I guess. Sorry about that.
ReplyDeleteHere's the link..
http://imagination19.blogspot.in/2012/09/bagged-and-tagged.html
:D Thank you!
ReplyDeleteah, brought back memories of my kids' first steps, thanx
ReplyDeleteGlad you could connect! <3
ReplyDeleteYes, I remember, and you've caught it so well. magic!
ReplyDelete:D hehe..Magic truly!!!
ReplyDeleteThat is wonderful news! Thank you!
ReplyDeleteBut cannot see the link my friend! :(
:D eeeee
ReplyDeleteMust be such a moment!!!
The initial stumbles..and then...:)
Like d bird's first flight!
A wonderful first...it brought my memories of my first son wobbling and walking on his own ~
ReplyDeleteah, made me see first steps again, thanx
ReplyDeletebeautiful, tender and touching piece. My sister just had two girls the past two years, and it's such a wonderful things watching them grow up so quickly. Thanks for sharing with us tonight
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