tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9142016656236828341.post7633597768947485273..comments2024-01-12T08:16:10.573+05:30Comments on Live Love Believe..: Dreaming the RainsPRIYANKA DEYhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16402400762832718398noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9142016656236828341.post-60487851543066214062013-09-02T21:33:48.409+05:302013-09-02T21:33:48.409+05:30What a gorgeous poem! I especially love the phras...What a gorgeous poem! I especially love the phrase "<br />Zeus draws the stains of lilac shadows." The repeating refrain works well, drawing us farther into this daydream. Very nicely done! Thanks so much for sharing this with us over at Poetry Jam this week.Mary Mansfieldnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9142016656236828341.post-7981715982736534622013-09-02T21:33:47.411+05:302013-09-02T21:33:47.411+05:30I like rain too, and here I especially like the re...I like rain too, and here I especially like the refrain running through, a healing cascade of wordsRuthhttp://turtlememoir.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9142016656236828341.post-8491434733470733162013-09-02T21:33:46.398+05:302013-09-02T21:33:46.398+05:30This is a beautiful poem! So many beautiful image...This is a beautiful poem! So many beautiful images. And I loved the repeating stanza. I can just see that cascading rainMarynoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9142016656236828341.post-57103150961096551472013-09-02T21:33:33.431+05:302013-09-02T21:33:33.431+05:30I have seen the brittle in everything
and started ...I have seen the brittle in everything<br />and started off for a new beginning.<br /><br />...a great, transcending line!<br /><br />www.poetlaundry.comJennifer Wagnernoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9142016656236828341.post-92102156991198834182013-09-02T21:27:33.968+05:302013-09-02T21:27:33.968+05:30Testing a commentTesting a commentPrayag Vermahttp://www.stylifyyourblog.com/noreply@blogger.com